Post by ~Raven~ on Jun 5, 2010 19:59:11 GMT -5
Name - Redpaw
Age - 5 moons
Clan - VortexClan
Rank - Apprentice
Gender - Male
Personality -He is a very courageous cat with scars in his life. His brother was recruited as an apprentice before he was. Sadly when he finished his training and tried to kill a warrior from VoidClan, he failed and lost his life to the clan. Redpaw is so confused by this anger that consumes him, whenever he hears their names, the clan's behavior. His yowl is the most heard over the clan meetings. He hates them but doesn't want to he wants to sink his claws into their pelts and tear them apart. Then his mind traps him and he feels so exhausted that his mind just drifts away. But when it is in his head he hates his clan, he hates all clans, and he does not serve the leader for the leader's purposes but only to kill the cat that killed his brother.
Appearance -
History - Redpaw was born in a litter of three. Him, his brother, and his little baby sister. His mother had birth and then left him and his sisters to themselves. Her hatred consumed her as well and controlled her. She took off for battle with the rest of the pack of mangy animals and never came back. In his eyes he hated his mother. His father of course is now in the elite cats that battle a lot and is rarely there for his son. What happened next is his brother becoming an apprentice, he is training and it is so fun whenever he returns. Sometimes he even taught his brother some fighting moves to try on his mentor. Sadly this little nice thing he had was abruptly taken from him when his brother returned for the last time, telling his siblings of his new mission. To kill a cat from the other clan. At the time Redpaw knew nothing of it, thought his brother was the best. But when he didn't return sadness over swept him and his sister. She fell gravely ill and died. Now he is to be an apprentice. And soon he will have to be challenged to the saddest duel. Of which he will win for his beloved brother.
Roleplay Example - Soon his claws would sink into his mentors ragged pelt, he told himself, digging his claws into the ground with fierce determination in his eyes. His mentor would feel his pain. But not now, not today. Today Redpaw was going to be the brightest student. The outgoing, courageous and bright cat that they all thought he was. Soon he would change in front of their eyes into someone they could not ever understand... His thoughts drifted away, his mind became as blank at the now cloudy sky, and his eyes were clean of any hurt, fierceness, or challenging stare.
Age - 5 moons
Clan - VortexClan
Rank - Apprentice
Gender - Male
Personality -He is a very courageous cat with scars in his life. His brother was recruited as an apprentice before he was. Sadly when he finished his training and tried to kill a warrior from VoidClan, he failed and lost his life to the clan. Redpaw is so confused by this anger that consumes him, whenever he hears their names, the clan's behavior. His yowl is the most heard over the clan meetings. He hates them but doesn't want to he wants to sink his claws into their pelts and tear them apart. Then his mind traps him and he feels so exhausted that his mind just drifts away. But when it is in his head he hates his clan, he hates all clans, and he does not serve the leader for the leader's purposes but only to kill the cat that killed his brother.
Appearance -
History - Redpaw was born in a litter of three. Him, his brother, and his little baby sister. His mother had birth and then left him and his sisters to themselves. Her hatred consumed her as well and controlled her. She took off for battle with the rest of the pack of mangy animals and never came back. In his eyes he hated his mother. His father of course is now in the elite cats that battle a lot and is rarely there for his son. What happened next is his brother becoming an apprentice, he is training and it is so fun whenever he returns. Sometimes he even taught his brother some fighting moves to try on his mentor. Sadly this little nice thing he had was abruptly taken from him when his brother returned for the last time, telling his siblings of his new mission. To kill a cat from the other clan. At the time Redpaw knew nothing of it, thought his brother was the best. But when he didn't return sadness over swept him and his sister. She fell gravely ill and died. Now he is to be an apprentice. And soon he will have to be challenged to the saddest duel. Of which he will win for his beloved brother.
Roleplay Example - Soon his claws would sink into his mentors ragged pelt, he told himself, digging his claws into the ground with fierce determination in his eyes. His mentor would feel his pain. But not now, not today. Today Redpaw was going to be the brightest student. The outgoing, courageous and bright cat that they all thought he was. Soon he would change in front of their eyes into someone they could not ever understand... His thoughts drifted away, his mind became as blank at the now cloudy sky, and his eyes were clean of any hurt, fierceness, or challenging stare.
